The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
This was a nice story. Very heart-warming. Have you heard they, whoever they are, are trying to get Gideon Bibles out of hotel rooms and hospitals? Well, anyway, very good writing!
Laury
A heart-warming story that shows how the Holy Spirit works on our behalf and how God can use what seems a tragedy to His good purpose. My favorite line: that inner wind rushed insistently as if driven toward, and yet beyond, its destination.
I love the voice in this piece. Your characters are believeable. I enjoyed the read.