The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
This is something very much outside my realm of experience, but I found your last paragraph very moving, and the whole piece was very well-written.

I didn't understand why Fiona felt that she had to go forward to recieve that particular gift...it almost seemed as if she felt pressured to do so? Chalk it up to my own lack of understanding, probably.

I definitely hung on every word, and found this very interesting.
12/01/07
Thank you for sharing this experience.
Laury
12/08/07
Wonderful article. It addresses real thoughts people experience while stepping out in faith to speak in tongues. (Reminds me of my own experiences.) Loved the ending.