The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
I really enjoyed getting to know these early Christians, and I love the bit about the amulet and the "baby believer."

There may have been a few too many characters and scene changes for such a short story...I got lost a few times.

I like that you set this back in ancient times; it makes me appreciate that the spiritual gifts were always with us.
11/29/07
You did pack a lot into this entry. It was very good, though. Keep on writing!
Laury
12/08/07
Lovely story about Tabitha from the Bible. However, I got lost when you suddenly changed her name to Dorcas, without explaining it was her name in Greek. I enjoyed watching all the ways she helped people.