The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
Your 3rd paragraph is a masterpiece!

I think he was "wandering", not "wondering".

This is a first-rate example of a character study. Could be used as a teaching piece in a writing class, it's that good.
11/29/07
I would love to meet Harry. Very good story. What a great job for retirees.
Laury
12/01/07
There is nothing plain about Harry now, is there? We all need a volunteer like him. He has a wonderful gift he shares.