The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehe I liked this. Obviously, the Lord didn't want him preaching his planned sermon. Great descriptions. I could see everything happening.
I enjoyed reading this article - and isn't it just great when God takes over! :)
Wonderful story! I know "someone" this has happened to. :) What a sweet couple you've created. Very nicely written!
Poor man! But the Lord used his dependence on Him to show him He could be trusted-even with this first important sermon. Good story and the characters are very nice to read about.
Love the interaction between the MC and his wife. A delightful story.
Cute story, and nice interaction between husband and wife.
Very nice. The interaction between the husband and wife was very real. I loved all your descriptions. I'm glad he learned a lesson through the little mishap. I might have panicked. Good job.