The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/07
This one caught me by surprise and I had to do a little re-reading. The MC was the custodian? Very nice... I like the descriptions of the different people and their experiences. Nice job!
Laury
11/25/07
Interesting point of view. Interesting way of presenting the many hues/needs of the body of Christ. Well written, too.
11/27/07
Interesting POV to this story. I like the the way you described the congregation and the various problems they were dealing with on the one Sunday morning. It's just like that in real churches every Sunday.