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11/22/07
Hehehe this was TOO funny! I wonder who's face was redder, hers or the pastor's?
11/23/07
Very funny. Real life experiences are almost always more funny than any we could make up:) Good job!
Laury
This is great! I love the title, and the "incident" is hilarious. Nice job.
Cute title, and entertaining entry. This topic could have been a tad boring, but you kept it light and funny all the way through. And the fact that it actually happened, makes it all the funnier! Great job!
11/25/07
This is so real life Christian service & ministry. Wonderfully written, well-handled subject.
11/27/07
I'm so glad you wrote this - and wrote it so well. Great story. Great message. And really, really funny. Excellent writing!
11/27/07
Cute and funny story! You really had me involved with the MC's fear of speaking to a crowd and I didn't expect the ending at all! True life IS funnier sometimes.
11/27/07
How funny! You've told this very well!
Wonderful! Fun to read and I felt her 'pain' all the way through.
11/27/07
I needed to read this after today. Very entertaining and well presented. Thank you, Faithwriter. God bless.
I could feel your MC being uncomfortable. This was well done, and with just the right touch of humor. Loved the ending.
11/28/07
I was chuckling throughout this piece! Great job!!!!
11/28/07
Great title, and fun story to read. I have a similar story--our pastor once forgot his mike was live and he had it on while he, um, visited the little boy's room right before the service...
11/28/07
I wonder how many hcildren Pastor Tim has! This is a great, funny piece -- some of our best stuff comes from real-life. Good job
11/28/07
Okay, your title had be interested and your last line was a keeper! This is so hilarous, I liked the "TEA" and how in the end, a rehearsed speech wasn't what really mattered, but getting a message out for real.
Oh my, that was hilarious. I would have loved to have been there for that one!
Very well written. I felt your anxiety and your desire to please God with your words.
11/28/07
LoL. Oh, that was gooooood!! I'm still chuckling over that! Great job! Hugs!
I think we have all been in your MC's shoes at one time or another, and you've done a masterful job of telling and completing the story.
This is such a fun read. Very cute story. Well done!
11/28/07
a great slice of life for sharing. nice use of your space and choices of what to put into the story and what to indirectly reference.