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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: At the Pulpit (11/15/07)

TITLE: The Preacher Sat Down
By Kristen Hester


Gary Davis sat on the platform and wearily waited for his turn at the pulpit as the choir finished singing “The Old Rugged Cross.” As he waited, he looked to the front row where his dear wife sat with her eyes closed. Gary could just barely make out her lips moving. She’s praying for me. Gary smiled. He looked out over his congregation and his smile faded. The heaviness in his heart returned. The things I know would make my hair curl, if I had any left.

There was Brett and Debra Peterson on the second row as usual. He was a doctor and she looked elegant in her designer clothes. They appeared to be the perfect family with their three tow-headed daughters. Few knew, as he did, that their marriage was on the rocks. Just behind them sat Franklin Cooper. He inherited several million from a rich uncle several years back, but continued to put only $5 in the offering plate each week. On the other side of the aisle from Franklin sat Tom Fuller. Cancer was preventing Tom from harvesting this year’s crop. Mike Farlow and his family sat in front of Tom. Mike was unemployed and his family was about to be evicted from their apartment. That was just in the first few rows.

The needs were great, but without his inside knowledge, he wouldn’t suspect a thing. Everyone was dressed in their Sunday best, big smiles painted on their faces. In a minute I’m going to stand up and preach a sermon that won’t make one bit of difference in these people’s lives. The song ended and it was his turn, but he didn’t move. He looked down at his sermon notes and sighed a prayer. Lord, use me. The congregation got antsy as the moments ticked by. Finally, Gary stood up slowly and walked to the pulpit, leaving his sermon notes on his chair. He looked at the crowd.

“Love one another,” he said simply. He stood quietly for a second and then went back to his seat. When no one moved, he returned to the pulpit and repeated his “sermon.”

“I said, love one another.”

Gary was slightly amused at the confused expressions on his congregations’ faces. People turned their heads to their neighbors and shrugged their shoulders. Gary looked down at his wife. She looked confused also as she glanced nervously around the sanctuary. Then their eyes met and she understood. She quickly bowed her head and started praying.

The first one to move was Franklin Cooper. Franklin stood up, walked to the pulpit and spoke into the microphone. “I have a rent house that just became available. I was wondering, does anyone need a place to live...rent free?”

There was shocked silence. Timid Meredith Baker stood up, paused as she gathered her nerve, and then said, “The Farlow family would never ask for help, but I know they need a place to live. They have two small children.”

“Perfect,” said Franklin. “The previous renters even left a swing set in the yard.”

When Pauline Willows started up the steps to the pulpit with her cane in hand, two deacons on the front row rushed to help her. She gingerly made her way to the pulpit and then took a moment to catch her breath before speaking. “I’m too old to do physical labor, but I’ll cook a meal for anyone that will help plow Tom Fuller’s field. He has cancer, and can’t do it.”

Immediately, five men stood up and said, “I’ll do it.” Tom looked down at his lap and wiped his eyes.

Brett Peterson was next at the pulpit. “I haven’t been the husband I should. Everyone’s doing for others, so I hate to ask; but I’d like to do right by my wife. We need some time alone, but we don’t have anyone to watch our girls.”

Three different mothers stood up and said they’d arrange everything. Debra covered her face and sobbed as Brett patted her on the back.

For the next hour, people filed up to the pulpit, admitting needs or offering help. Gary sat in his chair, dumbfounded. Thank you, Lord. When the service finally concluded he stood at the back and shook hands with a different congregation. As Bill Harper left he said, “That’s the best sermon I’ve ever heard. I can’t wait to hear next week’s sermon.”

Gary Davis smiled to himself. Neither can I.

"A new command I give you: Love one another. As I have loved you, so you must love one another." John 13:34 (NIV)

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Verna Cole Mitchell 11/22/07
This excellent story perfectly illustrates "love in action."
Marita Vandertogt11/23/07
This is a church service I would have loved to have been part of. I started getting teary at the expressions of love. Even though the characters are fictional, it has a feeling of real. Nicely written.
Therese Witkus11/23/07
Beautiful from start to finish!
Lynda Lee Schab 11/24/07
Love this! Masterful, indeed.
Joanne Sher 11/24/07
This is great. I just LOVE how God worked in this congregation. Awesome, inspired message masterfully told.
Dee Yoder 11/25/07
Oh, how much God wants us to be this way to each other. Instead, we have "church", where we never reach out or touch each other's lives outside our buildings! Great story...it needs to be in every church bulletin next Sunday!
Karen Wilber11/27/07
This is such an inspiration. Excellent message!
Sharon Henderson11/27/07
It's not fair! I never cry. Not at sad movies, not at funerals. Yet this is at least the 2nd or 3rd time something you have written brought real bona-fide tears to my eyes. Now where exactly can I find this beautiful congregation??? :-) :-) :-)

Well done!
Beth LaBuff 11/27/07
Ah, great story! Beautifully written!
Jan Ackerson 11/27/07
Kristen, almost nothing ever chokes me up--but this story did. Way to go, girl, this is gorgeous.
Sharlyn Guthrie11/27/07
Now that would be some service to witness! Love your originality!
william price11/27/07
Kristen, this was so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. You are definately becoming a well rounded writer, able to conquer and deliver and style. If you ever doubted your ability/anointing; DON'T. You can write, girl and deliver the goods. Excellent job. Sincerely!
God bless.
Betty Castleberry11/27/07
I so want this to be true! The message is simple, yet profound. You illustrated it very well.
LauraLee Shaw11/28/07
I cried several times while reading this. Our best family friends are senior pastors', and I know this story to be more true than many would realize. Wow!
Yvonne Blake 11/28/07
Wow! The message of this story is touching and convicting. That is what the local church is all about, reaching out to each other.
Well done!
Temple Miller11/28/07
Wow! Beautiful story. Wish it could really happen in all of our churches!
Sara Harricharan 11/28/07
Brought tears to my eyes. You have a real knack for writing moving stories and realistic characters that we can all relate to. I needed this, this morning, thanks!
LaNaye Perkins11/28/07
I love, Love, LOVE this story! You did an awsome job of telling it.
Patty Wysong11/28/07
Oh, what a story!! This is Excellent! Hugs!
Loren T. Lowery11/28/07
Excellent writing and story. At first I was concerned that the pastor was holding things in his mind about his congregation that shouldn't be there, but then the more I read, the more the real story unfolded - beautifully.
Catrina Bradley 11/28/07
Oh, I'm so glad I picked this one to read. What a beautiful story. And so well told. Wonderful job.
Pam Carlson-Hetland11/29/07
Congrats on your EC win. This is an exceptionally well written piece. I really like how you write!
Sheri Gordon11/29/07
Congratulations on your EC. What a beautiful picture of what a church body should be. It left me thinking, "if only ..."
LauraLee Shaw11/29/07
Way to go, Kristen!!! I'm so happy this was on the Editor's Choice list! Congratulations, friend. :)
Lynda Lee Schab 12/01/07
Have to pop back in and say CONGRATS, girl! I loved this entry. Yay for you!
Marilyn Schnepp 12/06/07
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! A+ Tops! Congratulations!
Holly Westefeld02/19/08
Shame on me for not having told you how much I liked this the first time I read it. You can add me to the tissue-hunting group. This is definitely my favorite piece of yours since I joined.