The Official Writing Challenge
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This is awesome, a beautiful presentation of the one who stands at the pulpit to bring God's Word to the people.
11/24/07
You wrote a nice little summary of the Bible in 750 words or less. Good job!
Laury
11/28/07
Beautifully written! The man in he middle theme is a wonderful visual. Very moving and spiritual free verse.
11/29/07
Your structure and word choice was fantastic. I see only a few reads and comments for you so far, but I see this one doing real well in the competition.
11/30/07
Wonderful imagery and so deep. I think I need to read this several times over to get the whole thing - but that is a GOOD thing. I'm not a free verse expert, but it seemed to flow very nicely. Nice job tying it all together. Thanks for pointing me your way :)