The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
This is a very clever piece. Great job in portraying the hand of God on His Church.
Laury
I enjoyed this allegory. It definitely kept my interest. It would help the readability to leave spaces between paragraphs. Overall, great job.
11/28/07
Lovely! I especially like the ending and the last line. The characters are so sweetly described.