The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/07
I love unconventional people. I love these vows and I loved your story so much I shed tears. I too give them a better than average chance of having a successful marriage. They remind me of a couple I knew in college (Bim and Betsy). Not that it means anything but I noticed all four names begin with "B" isn't that interesting. Thanks for your story.
11/24/07
This was very unique and unexpected:) Good job in describing the MC and the wedding scene! Nice job all around!
Laury
11/25/07
This is really, really cute. I like the story, I like the writing and I like the way the characters come across - very real.
11/27/07
This was so funny - "Thankfully, no one objected to the union -- the location, their outfits, the attendants, and the music, yes, but not to the actual wedding." LOL!
11/27/07
Love the last line! What an unusual wedding that would have been to attend. I love the characters and the story. Very unique!