The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, if only the reality was already with us! Nice story and great dream.
11/24/07
That last line absolutely slapped me in the face. Wondering if I know who wrote this. Very convicting and thought-provoking.
11/24/07
Yes! Yes! I love this entry. This is the kind of out-of-the box thinking that could usher in a new way of identifying the "church" as a living, breathing, walking and talking temple of the Lord. Oh wait! Jesus already did that when God brought His Holy Power out of the Ark of the Covenant and right into the heart of the believer. Hmmm...but those pews are just SOOO comfy, aren't they?
11/28/07
Oh my word, the ending was stunning. Very profound message.
11/28/07
Very surprising ending. Much to think about in this piece. If only ...
11/28/07
Yikes! Made me gulp at the ending...great writing!
11/28/07
Oh my goodness! Your ending just hit me in the brain! Excellent read from the title, especially to the end!