The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
Oh, very good. The dialog was very realistic, especially the little girl. I loved the ending, of him finally meeting his real Father. Great job.
11/24/07
I gasped at the end - and was completely engaged all the way through. This touched me in an amazing way.
11/24/07
I like this. I like the way you show the feeling of being alone at night in the sanctuary with God. Good descriptions. I'm not sure the ending is the best, but all in all, it's good.
11/24/07
Touching. I like the part of the story where the minister shows real love to the Grandfather. Lovely story.
11/25/07
I really liked this story. It kept me engaged all the way through. I especially loved the interaction between the g-pa and the granddaughter.
Laury