The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
11/24/07
Great story. I think this has been my favorite in this level so far:) You left us hanging as to what happened to the Orville but a little left to the imagination is good. I like how you followed the pulpit through so many years until the treasure was found. Great job!
Laury
You packed a lot of story into just 750 words. You caught my interest from the beginning and I couldn't stop reading till the end. Very well written with a chuckle at the end. Great job!!