The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Beautiful sentiment. The last sentence confused me until I re-read it a few times. Punctuation could easily resolve that. Was the MC his parent? Finding his poem would be an encouragement.
11/19/07
This is sad, but there is hope too. It has a nice rhythm and I'm sure is written from the heart. Thank you for writing this.