The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Thank you for the reminder to seek out silence. The world is very loud. Thank you for sharing.
Laury
11/15/07
Good descriptions as you set the scene. It led the reader to believe encouragement would come from Carla - nice turn-around!
11/17/07
Definitely a neat perspective - and a wonderful reminder to all of us. Great job of characterization, especially on your MC.
11/18/07
I like that kitty litter was added to your list of necessities for winter travel! Nice touch! I've never heard of a "silent lunch". You've written this very well.