The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Thank you for the reminder to seek out silence. The world is very loud. Thank you for sharing.
Laury
Good descriptions as you set the scene. It led the reader to believe encouragement would come from Carla - nice turn-around!
11/17/07
Definitely a neat perspective - and a wonderful reminder to all of us. Great job of characterization, especially on your MC.
11/18/07
I like that kitty litter was added to your list of necessities for winter travel! Nice touch! I've never heard of a "silent lunch". You've written this very well.