The Official Writing Challenge
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You give the reader much to contemplate... good!
11/16/07
Impressive. Can't tell you why, but I liked this. It moved me and, yes, encouraged me. God bless.
11/17/07
Much to ponder - and some fascinating images. Keep writing.
11/18/07
Your writing projects so many images. The words you use dance. Your last paragraph is my favorite, "I am beauty, opus of all, symphony in shades of light...Gaze on me and watch while I flicker, ululate, plash and play to etherís echo. I am encouragement."
Beautiful writing.
11/19/07
Gorgeous, gorgeous imagery.
11/20/07
What a wonderful way to describe this often fleeting emotion. I love the animation you gave to this topic word. The title is really good, too.
Your poem is gorgeous and packed with feeling. The last stanza is simply breathtaking.