The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This was so well written that I found myself wanting to skip to the end to make sure she didn't 'do it', and I was so relieved and happy to find out she stayed a 'good girl'.
Well done!
11/16/07
Extremely well presented. The writing is superb; fearless with the conviction of the Holy spirit. I like an author who has something to say and is not afraid to say it when they know they heard it from the Lord. Impressive and anointed. God bless.
11/17/07
Excellent. I loved her response about not wanting a 'bad boy'. This was so well written, and intrigued me from the very beginning. Well done!
11/17/07
This is incredibly powerful and thought-provoking. Excellent storytelling with a powerful, powerful message.
11/18/07
I almost felt like I should stop and pray for her as I was reading. Very good writing!
11/20/07
You told this story with just the right voice-realistic and natural. What a good reminder that a mentor in the church can have a powerful influence, too.