The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
I don't usually like stories where I don't know who "he" or "she" is. Its tricky to pull off, but you did masterfully. I guess that is why you write in this level. Very anointed. Excellent job! God bless.
11/16/07
Wonderful job of creating the sense of place. I got a touch lost in the beginning, but that was probably just me. Love the admonitions - so authentic!
11/21/07
I could picture the store and the stacks of books. The beginning was a bit confusing. Overall, an anjoyable piece.
11/21/07
This was very interesting. I had to do a little re-reading but wouldn't have bothered if I didn't like your story:) Thank you for sharing!
Laury
This was very intriguing. Well done!
11/21/07
Great story. I was a little confused at first about who was who, but that cleared up with the second reading. I'm guessing that the stranger is an angel? Loved the ending.