The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Great story. I liked the way you connected the characters and the encouragement each received.
11/15/07
Novel type writing. I felt like I was reading one of the masters, which I was. LOved it and was/is very impressed. I don't save many stories here, but this one I will. Great job. God bless.
11/16/07
What an amazing encounter, portrayed by this writer in an amazingly wonderful and engaging way. Excellent descriptions. Lovely.
What a neat story. God works in mysterious ways! I think you meant "alley" rather than "ally." Other than that, it's superb.