The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story. It's an excellent parable for encouragement.
11/17/07
Wow! I love this story! A "parable" is a perfect description. What a beautiful ending metaphor. You've done a great job with this.
11/17/07
Just lovely - I was swept away into this world - and it did NOT end how I expected. Great stuff.
Beautifully written and wonderful message. Excellent job of encouragement.
11/20/07
We often forget the beauty of encouragement, and the encouragement in beauty! God does a wonderful thing when He graces our lives with beautifully encouraging people. Wonderful story.
You wove this story together really well. Great writing!
11/23/07
This is such a simple concept yet so profound. Lovely writing. Well done on your EC.