The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/07
I like the unique format of this free verse poem. A good message too.
11/16/07
I love this image:
"As to Your throne we bear a weaker member"

This just begs to be read aloud!

Wonderful title.
11/16/07
I loved the format, the style, the pace, the message and the anointing. I favor free verse. Impressive and inspiring. God bless.
11/17/07
Love the alternating voice and the form. I'd love to hear it read aloud too. You've left us with a lot to think about. Nice work on this!
11/17/07
Enjoyed this - much to ponder. Love the format.
11/21/07
I like the contrast you make between the two voices. The rhymed voice gives a message of despair in the meter, and the contrasting free-form voice feels less restricted. Unusual way to show the two kinds of emotions represented. I like the ending, too.
11/21/07
In a few words, you captured the depths of despair. Thankfully, voice one reached out for help.
Wonderfully, creatively written to show a soul in despair and pain. Great message, beautifully told.
I'm unfamiliar with this type of writing, but I like it. You did a great job on this piece.