The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the descriptions in here, the comparisons to a computer are great. I've felt exactly as you described sometimes.
I can't wait to find out who wrote this and I'd love to hear the extended version of the story sometime.
11/16/07
I love the thinking on this one: did it really happen? And may I say, been there, done that?! Love ya and keep writing! This is a winner!
Why, we could build a Kingdom together...by this shall all men know that you are My disciples, if you love one another.
11/16/07
Hah!!!! Great opening. and the rest did not disappoint. Did I say I liked your opening:) Creative and smart. God bless.
11/16/07
Cool way to create an entry! Loved the word count restriction. :) Well done!
11/17/07
Clever beginning - I'd also love to hear the rest of this story. Love the voice.
11/19/07
Great analogy in this piece. I believe the "other side of the story" is in the intermediate level.
11/23/07
You are correct, Seema, a friendship was galvanized because of God working through FaithWriters.