The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/07
I felt like I was with Sally from beginning to end - nice job of characterization. I believe you have a POV shift in the paragraph about the professor - it threw me, anyway. I enjoyed this piece very much.
11/22/07
I admit it, I'm a sucker for Christmas stories so, of course, I liked this:) You did a great job letting the reader get to know your MC and feel compassion for her. Thank you for sharing!
Laury