The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Well written. I enjoyed this lesson on encouragement.
11/16/07
I realy enjoyed your story. I love the name Heather. You did the name proud. God bless.
11/17/07
A lovely story with a wonderful message.
I think the ending dialog was a bit unnatural, but it could be me.
Great descriptions throughout. Keep writing.
11/19/07
Neat story! Wonderful lessons. This would be great to read to a Sunday School class. Well done.
11/19/07
Very sweet--loosen up the dialog a bit, and this'd be very nice for a book of familiy devotions.
11/19/07
What a beautiful lesson. I loved the detail about the $3.81. Good job.
11/20/07
Very heart-warming story. We never know how we can encourage others when we obey the Spirit's call to reach.
11/22/07
I love your title, now, after reading this:) Very cute! This was an engaging story. Thank you for sharing!
Laury