The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! Was this a walk down MEMORY LANE FOR ME... I was transported to McKinley School over 40 years ago to a special Valentine's Day party. My mom had decorated my cereal box so beautifully. Thanks for such a great story and all the little word pictures. Loved it!
Great idea using the cereal box's point of view! Well written with a good message and an attractive title. Nice work!
05/23/05
loved the POV. Good job!
05/23/05
Cute, cute, cute. Well written, the POV made the story.
Very clever! I loved this.
05/24/05
Well written, poignant and compassionate story. Interesting point of view that woked.
05/27/05
Loved it! Especially the cereal box worrying over her special friend. One suggestion- In the future if you leave a little space between paragraphs it will be an easier read :)
05/30/05
Very creative and most interesting. I liked the compassionate touch as well.
05/31/05
Hi Allison. Just popping in very quickly to let you know that you were in the semi-finals for the Valentine Challenge and came very close to making it into the Editors' Choice. Although you didn't actually receive an award, you did very well! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)