The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/07
I enjoyed this; it took me back to my own much younger years in the south....I've been to this kind of church!
There is so much in this story - it could be a much bigger piece to fill in all the events you describe. One comment I would make is that it didn't really address the topic until the end, but all in all, I found it a very interesting read, and well written.
11/14/07
I love your title. There was lots of description in here. Felt like I was there with you. You could really take off on this story and give us the "rest of the story." I would like to hear it! Thank you for sharing!
Laury