The Official Writing Challenge
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This very interesting story took me on a journey to an unfamiliar place. I love the conclusion.
Great descriptions, great sense of place. I assume you were describing druids or similar pagans. I could picture them. Loved the monks, too. Well done.
I love your last sentence! It really adds to the fable-like quality of this lovely, evocative story.
"So it was, a village found that in giving sanctuary, they found their own." This line is so perfect. Your story was easy to visualize--the mood was perfect. I love it. Masterfully written!
Again, a very different and creative entry. Well done. The descriptions were lovely and the whole idea was thoughtful, interesting and made an enjoyable read.
I love the feel of this entry and the descriptions of the villagers, their surroundings, and the brothers. Easily visualized and enjoyable to read!
Amazing story! I'd love to hear the pronunciation of the names.
This is very interesting. I wasn't quite sure where it was going, but ending was a good surprise. Nice job. There's a good lesson for us inside of here.
A great story, the imagery drew me in and carried me along. Beautifully crafted blend of fantasy and realism.
Congratulations on the EC!
Marvelous through-out... perfect last sentence summarizes so well!
Marvelous through-out... perfect last sentence summarizes so well!
Neat story. Obvious why you have accomplished so much with your writing.