The Official Writing Challenge
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This very interesting story took me on a journey to an unfamiliar place. I love the conclusion.
Great descriptions, great sense of place. I assume you were describing druids or similar pagans. I could picture them. Loved the monks, too. Well done.
11/12/07
I love your last sentence! It really adds to the fable-like quality of this lovely, evocative story.
11/12/07
"So it was, a village found that in giving sanctuary, they found their own." This line is so perfect. Your story was easy to visualize--the mood was perfect. I love it. Masterfully written!
Again, a very different and creative entry. Well done. The descriptions were lovely and the whole idea was thoughtful, interesting and made an enjoyable read.
11/14/07
I love the feel of this entry and the descriptions of the villagers, their surroundings, and the brothers. Easily visualized and enjoyable to read!
11/14/07
Amazing story! I'd love to hear the pronunciation of the names.
11/14/07
This is very interesting. I wasn't quite sure where it was going, but ending was a good surprise. Nice job. There's a good lesson for us inside of here.
11/15/07
***Congrats!***
A great story, the imagery drew me in and carried me along. Beautifully crafted blend of fantasy and realism.
Congratulations on the EC!
Marvelous through-out... perfect last sentence summarizes so well!
Marvelous through-out... perfect last sentence summarizes so well!
Neat story. Obvious why you have accomplished so much with your writing.