The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/07
I like the writing in this entry, but I don't fully understand some of the references! It could have something to do with the late hour I'm reading this...but, the descriptions are vivid and strong.
I like this. A good mixture of a cute storyline and yet still being thought-provoking as well...
11/13/07
I love the dialogue. Kids do change the words all the time! ...and sometimes those mistakes can speak to us adults. I even like the picture of her wiping her finger on the bed. Great job!
Your story brought me back to the years that have flown....
The verse, "a little child will lead them" is ringing in my ears after reading your captivating story
I enjoyed this cute little story of the lessons we learn from the things our little ones say.
11/14/07
Wowsers, this sentence rocks my socks off:

Maybe he’s finding couches to wipe his index finger on because we won’t acknowledge him long enough to offer him a Kleenex.

Love the mood of this little gem.