The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/07
I like the writing in this entry, but I don't fully understand some of the references! It could have something to do with the late hour I'm reading this...but, the descriptions are vivid and strong.
11/13/07
I like this. A good mixture of a cute storyline and yet still being thought-provoking as well...
11/13/07
I love the dialogue. Kids do change the words all the time! ...and sometimes those mistakes can speak to us adults. I even like the picture of her wiping her finger on the bed. Great job!
11/14/07
Your story brought me back to the years that have flown....
The verse, "a little child will lead them" is ringing in my ears after reading your captivating story
11/14/07
I enjoyed this cute little story of the lessons we learn from the things our little ones say.
11/14/07
Wowsers, this sentence rocks my socks off:

Maybe he’s finding couches to wipe his index finger on because we won’t acknowledge him long enough to offer him a Kleenex.

Love the mood of this little gem.