The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/07
Excellent devotional! I like the title, the story, the explanations, and the tie-ins to scripture. Well written and professional. It's difficult to catch and keep my attention with a devotional, but this one did and I enjoyed reading it very much.
11/13/07
Only "A"s on this story. VERY engaging and thought-provoking. A+
11/13/07
Very, very good!!
You tied everything in great and that example is perfect for that devotional! Great job!
What a nice devotional. You got your point across very well. Nicely done.
11/14/07
This was so cool! The title grabbed my attention. I was laughing at the beginning. Then you delivered the message. I loved this analogy: "One without the other is like a bottle with no message inside. .."