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11/08/07
This beautifully illustrates how God forgives us and enables us to forgive othere, as well as leading others to His forgiveness.
11/08/07
Good example of using the familiar to explain something that might not be so well understood. Well done.
11/13/07
This is a beautiful story. I like how you ended it on a playful note, too.

Creative title.
11/13/07
Very well done! Your characters and your dialogue were quite compelling.
11/13/07
Super! What a great analogy!
Hugs!!
11/13/07
Clever analogy. Good dialogue and an entertaining read. Well done.
11/13/07
You made me think about how I approach forgiveness. It's so easy to forgive some things, and much harder to forgive other transgressions, but to God, there's no difference. Good story, with likable characters.