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Aha! Caught me with this delightful analogy.
11/08/07
Well that was a real twist. I gotta tell you, being a MAC person myself, that I agree wholeheartedly. Well done.
11/09/07
Oh, you have grabbed my heart! One has to be a MAC User to understand just how incredible this story really is! And on a more serious note, this is exactly the way we evangelize, too. Wonderful!
Wow! This is so clever. I am very impressed with the writting and the "twist." Good job. One thought I had: What if the "Mac user" thought his friend was talking about his faith, but was really just talking about his computer? Never mind, your way was better. Just a thought. Don't change a thing!
11/13/07
I wish you could have seen my eyes widen at the end. :D
Very clever and well-written.
11/14/07
Aww...you got me! I like the surprise ending and the sneaky little analogy in your story. Beyond the clever plot twist, this has very believable characters and dialogue, too.
11/15/07
Cori, I know it's been said, but your ending is PERFECT. I had my hubby read it, and he loved it too - and he's a PC guy! ;) Very clever.