The Official Writing Challenge
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What marvelous pictures you made with words! I love the idea of bubbles washing away the sin from our hearts.
11/09/07
I loved the 'buttery' moon - wonderful detail throughout. You are a good writer! You told a story without preaching even with a preacher in it - I think the picture you created did that for you. Excellent.
11/13/07
This is so heartwarming, and it was good food for my imagination. Great job!
I loved your descriptions in this story. I felt like I was with the two kids, looking down on the glowing tent. I wanted to walk the aisle with them. Great job, as always.
11/13/07
Wonderfully descriptive and warm! Love the characters and the plot. The title is great, too. A very enjoyable story to read.
11/14/07
Great metaphor in the title and the next-to-last paragraph!
11/14/07
I could visualize Tom after reading your description (I especially like the "gingerbread crumbs". ) If I read this to my daughter I may have to add a disclaimer about NOT sneaking out of the house. :) Great writing as usual!