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This story shows excellently God's leading for evangelism. It's something awesome for you to remember that you listened to God's voice and a new Christian was born.
11/09/07
This is a moving story and very well written. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I love reading true stories of how God puts us in the right place at the right time. This was well written, and the ending was very satisfying. Well done.
What a wonderful story. It just shows that we only need to be available and obedient. God does all the work. He put all those people in her life and then you were there at the right moment to usher her into the Kingdom. Great job. Blessings!
11/13/07
What a cool testimony! It's very evident when the Lord speaks, but we often second guess what we've heard. Glad you listened and obeyed Him! You crafted this story in an expert way.
11/14/07
This is an awesome testimony -- and a real life example of why we need to say 'yes' when God calls us to be His witness, even when it is way out of our comfort zone.

You did a really good job telling the story. It was very entertaining, and pleasurable to read.

Good job with the topic.
11/14/07
Wow! Amazing story! You did a fantastic job writing this! How wonderful to have been a link in the chain for this girl.
11/14/07
What a riveting story! Great gripping, writing.
I absolutely loved your story. You have a wonderful story voice. My only suggestion is that you could have left out the details about your visit with Sarah since she wasn't involved in the story about the hitchhiker.
11/17/07
Often a testimony can have its own impact, and can get away with being poorly told. But you added quite a bit of extra impact here. Can't think how you can improve on this.
Go, writin' man!