The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/07
I kept thinking about the angel getting his wings in "It's a Wonderful Life". :) Your ending is great. I liked the "lightening striking once and the cross lighting twice". Creative idea and a well written story!
Love the writing style, MC's voice, and message. (Yes, the message in paragraph 5 would have been a little strong). Great reminder God will give what we need when we need it. Excellent job!
11/17/07
Wonderful in all aspects. The lightning obviously was a sign to concentrate on God and your message but, then to, it brought another into the fold.
Loved the ending.