The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/07
I smiled at your description of the town "not being too humid or buggy in the summer." I like your home-town flavor.

There seems to be a formatting problem (at least showing up on my computer -- with the apostrophe), I'm not sure what you could do to fix it.

I marvel at the spiritual discernment of certain people. I enjoyed your entry, especially knowing it was based on a true event.
11/11/07
I enjoyed your story, too, but I sure wish I knew exactly what happened to get the old guy suddenly talking to the young lady. The story hints about what he saw or heard, and I just wish I knew for sure what it was, especially since it was based on a true story!
I enjoyed the "down home country" storytelling in this piece. And, interesting characters I would love to know more about.
The gift of the word of knowledge. God has used that quite a few times in my life, revealing a thought or motive of another person, and I haven't always followed through to speak with them about it. I praise God for this true and encouraging story of a courageous brother in Christ. Thank you for sharing this. Loved the writing style, too.