The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/07
I read the last line & said to myself, "Wow."

Maybe try breaking it up into more paragraphs so it's easier to read. Maybe try putting some of the conversation in quotes; to make it more like a story than a telling?

Powerful story! God bless.
11/14/07
What a beautiful and powerful reminder to reach out and share God's love with everyone.

"Marsha was not a teacher. She was not a preacher's wife. She was just a true Christian who knew the transforming power of God."

The last line is a stunner. May God continue to work in your life! And he will! How exciting!!