The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/07
Delicious and homely. It reads just like a PK would write it. Excellent representation.
Excellent storytelling (love that it is true) and wonderful message. Great job on subject.
11/13/07
This is a nice entry. I like the MC. I especially like the ending -- the little kid trying to fit into Vern's shoes. Great job. The title reeled me in, so that's good, too:)
Laury
11/14/07
Oh, a bittersweet ending. I really like Vern, and what a messenger he was. The C's voice is so sweet, and it made me a little sad to know she didn't get to ask Vern her important question. Good story.