The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/07
The more I read of this, the more I liked it. By the end, I was hooked. Great job.
11/13/07
Creative entry--great title and ending. Fits well on topic. I really liked this!
11/13/07
Oh, good one!! Nice way to include many elements and keep us hooked--even those of us that don't normally read this genre. Great!! :-)
11/14/07
If it comes to this in our world, I hope there'll be many who'll be willing to step up to the plate like the characters in your story. Very interesting and well written.
11/14/07
I got hooked in as well. Now I want to know more about what happens! Aaargh! ;-)