The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/07
What a great testimony. I loved the title and how you used colors as a backdrop of faith changing.
11/10/07
Your title drew me to your story and it is a touching entry. I like the ending especially well, because you bring out the change in your MC and how she matured through listening to the wise counsel of another.
11/13/07
I remember looking up to certain women when I was young, too. I still do, as a matter of fact:) It's the ones that get real, that let themselves fade out so we can focus on Jesus -- those are the ones that teach us the most. Great writing.
Laury
11/16/07
I like the way you can weave poignant laughter and healing tears together with the other colourful elements in the fabric of this story. It makes it sound so real. This is REAL evangelism to me.
I like reading your articles. Keep 'em coming!