The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/07
This is a great message that could minister to anyone, no matter what their faith status might be. It was a little hard to read without spacing but I'm not proficient enough in poetry to know when (or if) to make line breaks. Very nice job!
A very good message for everyone.
As mentioned above I believe I would leave a space between each verse making it easier to read.
Good job.