The Official Writing Challenge
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This story really captivated me. I had to read on because I wanted to know what happened. You are a very good story teller.

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Excellent.
11/08/07
Beautiful story! I loved how the minister reacted so well to her "mistake" and how God used her that night. Very cute.
11/08/07
You are an excellent story teller, I enjoyed this very much. I believe alter call should be altar, but loved the story just the same and it fits so well with your message, maybe it was written that way by design!
This is such a cute story. I loved it and agree you are a great story-teller. Once my friend's small daughter told her mom that her favorite hymn was the "smoking song." What is the smoking song? the mother asked. You know, glorious things of thee are smoking.
11/13/07
Very touching and sweet. It often takes the words of a child, sometimes mistakes, to reach us.