The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/07
A nice story; it's good to know people realize how important Sunday school can be.
11/06/07
Wonderful illustration and a sweet memory.
11/07/07
I loved the story and especially the good credit to the work of the Lord in a little boy's life.
What a precious story. I am so glad "Jacob" has wonderful grandparents who take him to church. Your writing is very sharp and clear. It is easy to read. Good job.

I especially loved the part at the end when Jacob fell (I don't mean I am glad he fell lol) and he applied what he had learned in Sunday School. This is "showing" which is great in writing! It really connects with the reader more than telling.

Keep up the good work. Blessing! (And thanks for commenting on my story!)