The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
I really enjoyed this story! Wonderfully realistic dialogue--I could just hear those four teenage girls. Vivid descriptions, too--I could see the brown seagull trying to snatch the peanut from the white one. Terrific analogy for what the main character was struggling with!

The title also sparked my curiosity--I wondered what a day at the beach had to do with Sunday school. Great job!
11/02/07
This story reminded me of my own teen-age years and how my mother gladly took me to church even if the only reason was because the guest preacher was cute and young! Very realist. Well done.