The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautiful story! I could just see the sick, grimy little boy. Great dialogue too made the characters and scene come alive. I could feel with the teacher.
From the vivid descriptions, my heart went-out to this precious little fellow.
Wonderful - realistic and very touching at the end. Good reminder to us too:)) Nice writing.
I love how you drew me into the story. I'd love to read a sequel some time about how Dallas turned out.
Wonderful story.
You have captured both the sorrow and joy of being a Sunday School teacher. Thanks
This is so touching! Good job and congrats!
The story touches my heart, the message is desperately needed and your writing skill is pure enjoyment.
Congratulations on your EC. This really pulls at the heart strings. Good job.
This is a beautiful story. There's no glamour in working in the nursery, but it's so important to show God's love to babies and their parents. Your last line is wonderful.