The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
A beautiful story! I could just see the sick, grimy little boy. Great dialogue too made the characters and scene come alive. I could feel with the teacher.
From the vivid descriptions, my heart went-out to this precious little fellow.
11/02/07
Wonderful - realistic and very touching at the end. Good reminder to us too:)) Nice writing.
11/03/07
I love how you drew me into the story. I'd love to read a sequel some time about how Dallas turned out.
11/06/07
Wonderful story.
11/07/07
You have captured both the sorrow and joy of being a Sunday School teacher. Thanks
***CONGRATULATIONS!***
This is so touching! Good job and congrats!
The story touches my heart, the message is desperately needed and your writing skill is pure enjoyment.
11/08/07
Congratulations on your EC. This really pulls at the heart strings. Good job.
11/08/07
This is a beautiful story. There's no glamour in working in the nursery, but it's so important to show God's love to babies and their parents. Your last line is wonderful.