The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
Love the reminder that God uses anyone who is willing to serve and great humor in the piece. Very enjoyable!
11/02/07
Karlie sounds like a great role model. I liked the way we could see your character mature towards the end of the story.
11/02/07
Great story! I liked how you developed the teacher's character and tied it all in together:) Nice voice too.
11/03/07
Fun story and your characters were easy to visualize. Good lesson in that God uses all willing servants to further His kingdom.
11/04/07
I absolutely loved Karlie. You did a fine job of describing her. Wonderful writing.
11/05/07
Loved your story, Karlie was a great character, and those are the people we remember. If we are blessed, we learn wonderful truths from them, just as you showed.
11/06/07
And another personal favorite for me! I loved this. Karlie is a character I could feel for an idenitfy with. She was so real and I'm glad her MC learned much more than she'd expected from the experience. Great writing! ^_^
11/06/07
Great story.