The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, what a reminder to be careful what we say to children. The last paragragh took me by surprise. Excellent story.
11/05/07
Oh no... you poor kid. The things that we imagine to be true (because of a misunderstanding)! Great writing (as usual)! I felt the anxiety of your main character.
11/05/07
lol The end got me, for sure. But I loved it. Great job.
11/05/07
Okay, that was quite a surprise ending. And all the better knowing it was true. What an interesting Sunday school story. :)
11/06/07
This was very funny! I love your descriptions. Great job!
Laury
11/07/07
Oh my!!! Huge chuckle!!!! Good job putting a smile on my cranky face today!
11/07/07
Great writing! Captivating story! Loved it!
Oh how terribly sad that a false concept was taught to you to hurt what was precious and innocent at that impressionable time in your life. Well written. I was there all the way through.