The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/07
Oh dear, I really loved this until the end...Your structure was creative and excellent, and full of truths--but I wish you'd started with the negative and ended with the positive. I'm sure you wanted to leave us with that somber thought--it just left me sad.

You're a gifted poet, that's for sure.
11/06/07
Wow.
That pretty much sums this all up.
I loved this piece! It was simple and direct, the clarity, the descriptions and the way you crafted this was just beautiful! ^_^ Excellent writing!
I struggled with this, but that does not mean the writing was not well done.