The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
You show good potential in your writing skills. The story grabbed my attention the whole way through. I'd love to know what happened next!
I really liked this story. You did a wonderful job telling the story from the MC's point of view.
11/06/07
I could picture this kid — you did a great job getting into his head. And that neat twist at the end of the sotry was perfect.