The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/07
Cute story!

Hit "enter" one more time between paragraphs, please, to produce that white space. It'll be easier to read that way.

This one had some great images--nice sense of time and place.
Really enjoyed the story and the laugh that you created.
The second line about the purse has an awkward wording that could be smoothed out.
Nice that you allowed the pastor to accept the reality with good grace.